resume

[transmothra]

Anybody out there want to critique my online résumé? If so, i would be greatly appreciative!

(yes, the links to my portfolio are not active yet - those will be archived sites)

Comments

[mistressxenobia.livejournal.com]

You should help me set up my dotnetnuke blog. I can't figure the damn thing out.

3.1 points

[nastajus.livejournal.com]

with 6 years of rising talent and
- I think that's Too condensed, for my taste. I'd say 6 years of talent, then I'd say it's rising.

Producer of browser- friendly, clean,
- All browsers? It's been a long time since I lurked on HTMLforums.com, I don't remember if you loved/hated some of them.

Have been commended.
- Those are powerful words. It says you have a reference or more, and they have good things to say about you. Excellent and short. Now advertise it.

It's a minor point, but it is an online resume, so I'll bring it up. The separate page need some space at the edges of the screen to look good.

[taocub.livejournal.com]

It looks great to me, J!

I can't really give an honest critique because I am not good at doing resumes. I like what I see. I think I'd use a more conservative font. The part where you state what you want belongs in the cover letter...or so I've been told

*Shrugs*

Any help there?